Wash Drawing Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Wash Drawing

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OUR love felt like the beauty
of christ, then the devil pulled
up a seat, and took notes, i
hate to do he says, but i need
to turn this light into a cold
bitter wind,
wait a minute says god, you
can touch them, but not love,
for that is my own private
stock....
and these lovers stand up,
and kick this ancient convict
right between the knees...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 29 December 2006

Hurray for love! Well done!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 December 2006

AND THAT'S THAT & A WIN FOR THE GOOD SIDE...I LIKE IT DAVID..kEEP'EM COMIN''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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