Sunday, November 23, 2008

Water Bed (Fun Poem 92) Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were floating on the sea of passion
on our new waterbed,
suddenly it sprang a leak
and the bed went flat.
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David Harris
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Donall Dempsey 28 November 2008

A good captain always goes down with his bed! So you sprung a leak...should have just eaten it. Why didn't you sign nearer my god to thee? love Dónall Dónall

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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

haha! ! it was too watery.....lol! ! neat one there...........

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