Justin Moffitt

Water Thoughts - Poem by Justin Moffitt

I stood where the ocean met the forest
My feet molding the sand and
Cigarette violating the air -
Asking myself what I believed in
And eventually I came to the conclusion that
I believed in love and happiness
And not the stupid things the fairy tales told
However as the tides began to change
I started to realize they were one in the same
And so I swam into the current
Hoping to never be seen again

Comments about Water Thoughts by Justin Moffitt

  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (5/28/2012 11:39:00 PM)

    Good poem...simple words and clear message....nice style....liked it... (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/16/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    Hey, Guy, this is amazing and thought provoking write! Bravo! You got a good start heading toward the top of the Poetry World! Beauty and talent is clearly filtered through this short but powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • Scotty Dogg (4/16/2012 8:40:00 PM)

    Okay, I dig it. Gonna read more now. We'll see now won't we? S. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

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