Water Thoughts Poem by Guy Wild

Water Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


I stood where the ocean met the forest
My feet molding the sand and
Cigarette violating the air -
Asking myself what I believed in
And eventually I came to the conclusion that
I believed in love and happiness
And not the stupid things the fairy tales told
However as the tides began to change
I started to realize they were one in the same
And so I swam into the current
Hoping to never be seen again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 April 2012

Hey, Guy, this is amazing and thought provoking write! Bravo! You got a good start heading toward the top of the Poetry World! Beauty and talent is clearly filtered through this short but powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Scotty Dogg 16 April 2012

Okay, I dig it. Gonna read more now. We'll see now won't we? S.

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