Water Thoughts Poem by Guy Wild

Water Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


I stood where the ocean met the forest
My feet molding the sand and
Cigarette violating the air -
Asking myself what I believed in
And eventually I came to the conclusion that
I believed in love and happiness
And not the stupid things the fairy tales told
However as the tides began to change
I started to realize they were one in the same
And so I swam into the current
Hoping to never be seen again

Monday, April 16, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: fairy,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 April 2012

Hey, Guy, this is amazing and thought provoking write! Bravo! You got a good start heading toward the top of the Poetry World! Beauty and talent is clearly filtered through this short but powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Scotty Dogg 16 April 2012

Okay, I dig it. Gonna read more now. We'll see now won't we? S.

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