Waterfall At Lu-Shan Poem by Li Po

Waterfall At Lu-Shan

Rating: 2.9


Sunlight streams on the river stones.
From high above, the river steadily plunges--

three thousand feet of sparkling water--
the Milky Way pouring down from heaven.

Li T'ai-po
tr. Hamil

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faye Whittaker 26 June 2020

It's a lovely poem but I would make it a bit longer than that, but it is an amazing poem ??????

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nature creator 05 December 2019

its nice.. but too short. But u have natural ability for poems, just make them long (at least 4 paragraphs)

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* Sunprincess * 11 September 2015

.............lovely poem with beautiful imagery ?

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Aaron Moss 25 September 2005

Short and Sweet i love it

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