Raymond A Foss
Westfield, MA / United States
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Capturing The Sound Of Rain

Listening to the timpani
the rhythm of the rain
the rap, the tap,
the ratta-tat-tat,
the staccato of the drumming
on the roof of the van

The storm raging ‘round us
in the stillness of the parking lot
trying to drum to the beat

on laps and the steering wheel
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Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond A. Foss 07 March 2019

Thanks for the many positive comments.

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Paul Brookes 14 November 2015

You paint wonderful word pictures great poem

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Elena Sandu 28 March 2015

Nice moment of awareness. Thank you for sharing, loved the read!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 28 February 2015

You have wonderfully captured the sound of rain in your sweet poem.

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Paul Reed 10 December 2014

(Ex-drummer) the rhythm of the rain can never be captured. one of the best sounds in the world - thanks for these lines

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