Wave, The Phase Of Existence Comments
Upon sitting by the shore, observing the sea waves;
Gleaming by the sunshine, as it's wavelength's enclave;
These waves do propagate, along the rhythm of fundamentals;
Implicating it's amplitude, as the principle of galacticals.
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With fantastic imagery and intriguing weaving of concepts, the poem is superb, though tangential to a generalist. Enjoyed the poem in it's rhyme and few contents. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Many Many Thanks for writing me such a wonderful comment. Your inspirations shall definitely inspire me to write more.......
Dear sir, Firstly, I am really Thankful to you for welcoming me to this website writing such an astounding comment and encouraging my spirit to write more...... I am a student, reading in Class 8 from Odisha. I am also a member of allpoetry.com and invite you too....I have written over hundred poems at allpoetry......
I am not going to claim that I understood this poem because physics was never something I understood.. But I must tell you one thing, comparing the sea's wave with wavelength is fabulous... Thanks for sharing Ashutosh. And welcome to Poemhunter :)
Many Many Thanks for welcoming me to this website, writing me such a wonderful comment..... Rally Thankful to your inspirations.....
You are welcome Ashutosh.. Btw, class 8? ? Wow! You are really young and talented young man.. Keep going :) Take care :)
Very little excites me as much as science. Thank you, Ashutosh
Observing the sea waves; gleaming by the sunshine, is definitely fantastic with poetic imagery drawn here with wise mind. The telepathy of singularity as the link within infinite definitely puts us in philosophical thinking. Very interesting and wise poem shared definitely. I give you 10 in rating out of 10. WELCOME TO PH.
Dear sir, Firstly, I am really Thankful to you for welcoming me to this website writing such an astounding comment and encouraging my spirit to write more...... I am a student, reading in Class 8 from Odisha. I am also a member of allpoetry.com and invite you too....I have written over hundred poems at allpoetry......
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3/13/2026 12:18:06 PM # 1.0.0
comparing the sea's wave with wavelength gives it a new tone to your poem. great imagery. Observing the sea waves; gleaming by the sunshine.............. fantastic imagery... thank you dear poet. tony