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wow propellers raise we all have ours on raise too wow poet lovely start give u

A powerful and wonderful start. Thanks

Good rendition of words insightfully brought forth. A well drafted poem that leaves one with an enigma to ponder. Thanks for sharing Rafa.

I think this write inspired during travelling maybe, I maybe wrong but it has sense of spontaneous to talk about stay and departure in life as well... Or maybe a simple goodbye? Good write :) welcome to poemhunter and share with us more work!