We Were Flying More Steep, Poem by Liza Sud

We Were Flying More Steep,

We were flying more steep,
than on Mark Chagall's paintings.
He had houses still
that below you may see.

As for us, well, we flew
over so high mountains,
that together we saw
pure Light closely.

No images there,
no matter that flesh has,
deprived of ties with God,
curdled by egoism.

But to come back to Him,
and to get light's fulfillment,
That's what each of us may,
showing altruism.

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Мы летали покруче,
чем у Марка Шагала.
У него еще домики
снизу были видны.

Ну а мы пролетали
над такими горами,
что увидели вместе
Свет чистейший вблизи.

Там ни образов нет,
ни материи плоти,
их сгустил эгоизм,
связи с Богом лишив.

Но вернуться к Нему,
себя Светом наполнить,
может каждый из нас,
проявив альтруизм.

Sunday, February 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: ego
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 13 February 2016

back in The Light where realness abides perfectly a peace that exceeds comprehension you are there, wonderful!

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Daniel Brick 07 February 2016

Your second poem of salvation through altruism uses spiritual flight to close the gap between the divine and the the human. Your reference to Marc Chagall's flying lovers is inspired because memories of his gravity-defying lovers tumbling in the sky over Paris make spiritual flight accessible to our minds. You quickly drop that connection and focus exclusively on your vision which is a total liberation from the fleshly reality and the material world. Mountains are the last material image in your poem and their towering height is dwarfed by Spiritual Flight. The PURE LIGHT that suffuses the spiritual flyers is already shining within the Divine Presence. Words fail here because they are images and images partake of material reality. In the last stanza of your poem you take us beyond the material completely. We are outside of time and space; we are in Eternity, our Homecoming in God's presence, suffused in divine LIGHT. I should fall silent now,

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