Weather Poem by David Sabo

Weather



She will never know
if i will never tell
the way i feel
cos feelings fail
to keep my head together
when im fighting with the weather
whether or not to tell her

guess ill wait it out untill
whenever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Her Name Is Taylor 27 January 2010

i really like this, ive read a couple of your poems and i really like your style and fluidity of the words.. you're a humble poet and i think this is one of the better ones that ive read that i can relate to... a nice short modern poem

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Danny H 21 December 2009

i know this, words unspoke leave the heart broken i have so many words unleft to be said to my boyfriend but ill try to tell him and my mouth remains shut as my head battles itself.

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