David Sabo

Rookie (December 2nd,1990 / Oklahoma City)

Wack - Poem by David Sabo

I tried to cry, but I couldn't feel it,
I tried to lie, but I couldnt fake it,
I tried to fight, but I couldnt make it,
I tried to die.

Breaking down mentally
Breaking me physically
Sickest of memories
Breaking me instanly

Feeling tired.
That feeling like I dont belong
ALIVE

Feeling righteous
That feeling when you know, your always right.
ALWAYS

Cracking up,
Im laughing at a half a cup,
it aint empty and it aint full.

I had enough.
I cant tell if its really real,
drink it all, tell me how you feel.

How do you feel?

Really? !
For real? .


Comments about Wack by David Sabo

  • (12/22/2009 8:51:00 PM)


    for real, for real, check me out, i keep it real....love this! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/21/2009 6:37:00 PM)


    your words are never of proper gramar
    and thats the best part
    its you, your words, your heart on paper

    Breaking down mentally
    Breaking me physically
    Sickest of memories
    Breaking me instanly

    everyone in a sick slight of mind knows these feelings
    but we can conquer them and be strong again
    even in a moment of weakness
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 3:34:00 PM)


    Another brilliant poem david. May you never lose touch with how you feel. Marie x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, December 21, 2009


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