David Sabo

Rookie (December 2nd,1990 / Oklahoma City)

Lately, - Poem by David Sabo

Lately, i been feeling so crazy
I been missing my baby
but you know that she hates me

I dont know why i cant do nothing right
its like whenever i try
it ends up in a fight

i aint seen you in about a couple months
all my friends keep telling me im going freaking nuts
Running and running and running around
in cycles and circles eventually ill fall down


Comments about Lately, by David Sabo

  • (1/1/2010 6:43:00 PM)


    It called Love Addiction. Trust me, I know. It will take time. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/21/2009 6:24:00 PM)


    This is adorable! im sorry she hates you
    but love can make you mad
    i adore the phrase running running running in circles
    youll fall and stuff
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  • (12/21/2009 2:03:00 PM)


    'I dont know why i cant do nothing right
    its like whenever i try
    it ends up in a fight'

    lol i hate that when your daten someone and no madder what you do they start bitchin... i like how in your poems you leave some mistery, poeple can actually relate to them cuz they have imagery.
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  • (12/21/2009 11:25:00 AM)


    seriously lovin your poems dude! (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 2:21:00 AM)


    great poem not too long :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009



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