Weep Poem by Holly Heron

Weep

Rating: 4.3


Feel,
Hear,
Sense,
Do what feel's right,
Then weep.
Weep for my departure,
Weep for my release,
Weep for the last breath,
That has yet to pass my lips,
Feel the spirit leave my body,
Hear the stillness of my heart,
Sense my sweet relief.
Then weep,
For a life thats passed,
And a fate so cruel,
But for my sake soon stop your weeping,
And save it for the next time I am lost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gregory Gunn 25 January 2006

Dear Holly, It's refreshing to hear the plaints from the youthful souls on matters of the heart. A truly strong effort indeed. Gregory

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Jon Lloyd 10 November 2005

This is very nice. Kind of reminds me of 'Do not Stand at My Grave and Weep' (Anon) if you know it. A moving poem, Holly.

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