poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Welcome

“Dear wake up and get ready”
You are air borne and heavenly abode
No use of your staying here and spoiling others
God has specially sent us to pick you up as HE bothers

You have done enough disservice to mankind
Among self centered people, you were only little kind
We searched many eligible but could not find
Would you come along with us if you don’t mind?

I couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
Conceded the point that there may be some error
I thought of seeing self once more in mirror

God may have his own way of tackling the issues
Springing the surprise and offering the dues
I thought I might be the first person to get the invitation
Chest just broadened up with joy and excitation

Lavish treatment and extravagance at disposal
Not bad, but very good I thought was a proposal
Waited eagerly for anxious moments to realize
Remembered all incidences of life and summarize

Soon I sensed some trouble and gamble
Many people were standing and in shamble
I too would be just one of them and standing
I should have refused, escaped and evaded

I was ushered in with all the respect
I had enough time to see and inspect
May be some special occasion together and call
Greet them and …………….

You have done enough damage and harm
Your relation with all were hostile and not warm
You never thought of helping the poor
Confined to self and shut the door

You were shame on humanity
There was no use of your continuity
So you are called here with special mission
Call for all your misacts and admissions

Poem Submitted: Friday, September 25, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 23, 2011

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  • Adrianne Colton (11/23/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Conceded the point that there may be some error
    I thought of seeing self once more in mirror
    10

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  • Nathanial Jones (11/4/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    Very talented word play once again...8/10

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/3/2009 4:53:00 PM)

    You were shame on humanity
    There was no use of your continuity
    So you are called here with special mission
    Call for all your misacts and admissions
    excellent written..a masterpiece..thank you for sharing
    10++++++++++

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  • Lalvani Rekha (10/9/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    “Dear wake up and get ready”
    You are air borne and heavenly abode

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  • AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (10/8/2009 12:41:00 PM)

    Tempting address, novel treatment, beautiful composition, smooth flow, good rhyme. For all our misdeeds we may delude ourselves, we may delude others…but we can’t delude God…at Whose hands we are sure to be meted out our deserts.

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  • Suwarna Patil (10/7/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    Dear wake up and get ready”
    You are air borne and heavenly abode

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  • Ketan Rajgor (10/7/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    You have done enough disservice to mankind
    Among self centered people, you were only little kind
    We searched many eligible but could not find

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  • Ramdulari Sinha (10/3/2009 7:58:00 AM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
    Conceded the point that there may be some error

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  • Sita Kesri (10/2/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
    Conceded the point that there may be some error

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  • Sangita Rao (10/2/2009 9:43:00 PM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
    Conceded the point that there may be some error
    I thought of seeing self once more in mirror

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  • Severina Dsouza (10/1/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
    Conceded the point that there may be some error

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  • Nagesh Ratnavelu (10/1/2009 11:08:00 PM)

    God may have his own way of tackling the issues
    Springing the surprise and offering the dues
    I thought I might be the first person to get the

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  • Sunita Rao (10/1/2009 9:41:00 PM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty

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  • Venkat Ramanna (10/1/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    “Dear wake up and get ready”
    You are air borne and heavenly abode
    No use of your staying here and spoiling others

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  • K.v. Subbarao (10/1/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
    Conceded the point that there may be some error

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  • Darshna Chopra (9/30/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
    I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty

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  • Kunwar Patel (9/30/2009 9:48:00 PM)

    God may have his own way of tackling the issues
    Springing the surprise and offering the dues
    I thought I might be the first person to get the invitation

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  • Kamli Kamal (9/30/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    “Dear wake up and get ready”
    You are air borne and heavenly abode
    No use of your staying here and spoiling others

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  • Ratna Patel (9/30/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    You have done enough disservice to mankind
    Among self centered people, you were only little kind

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  • Radha Seth (9/30/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    You have done enough disservice to mankind
    Among self centered people, you were only little kind
    We searched many eligible but could not find

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