Benjamin Dotse

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What A Dream - Poem by Benjamin Dotse

steadily i stand the test,
finally it's the end,
crown of victory upon my head it laid
as with persistence, i became the best.

Reward and honor is my crest
boldly i hit my chest
YES, for passing the test
SILVER around my neck
and pure GOLD around my wrist

Over hills and mountains my name trend
they bow at my feet
pouring fine drinks and wine

In the castle i stay
kings-men and knight men, they salute me.
At each roar i make they slumber,
at the sight of concubines i show mercy,
just open my eyes to realize its a dream in dismay.

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (6/29/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    Keep on dreaming Benjamin. One day you will wear the gold if you keep poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/29/2011 9:00:00 AM)

    It was a marvellous poem written with great skill. The poem is highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. A fine 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
    Warmest regards
    Akmal
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, October 3, 2011


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