poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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What Can Be Secret.........

What can be secret of longitivity?
Has it to do something with continuity?
Any living being has to be continuous
Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness

You stop breathing and life is over
Close the eyes and loose the cover
Anything you miss and chance is lost
Life counts each moment and survives the most

I want to live and breathe the fresh air
Concentration full with no split hair
Worry and dullness leaving apart
Complete movement with joy and look smart

I want to be simple and honest
So close to HIM after offering the best
May it be as difficult as acid test?
Still will be smooth as life rest

What have I to do with worldly things?
It has no use for me to be used as something
With bare minimum need for use
It may serve more and not defuse

World is demanding more and more
Situation was not bad as this before
Income less and expenses rising
More unnatural deaths really surprising

It may not bother me as individual
I may take it simple and casual
It may not look sound and unusual
We have to play simple but no role dual

It may bring some sanity
Life so close to the reality
Real happiness with joy and amity
To lead a life with honour and simplicity

Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

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  • Adrianne Colton (11/23/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    It may bring some sanity
    Life so close to the reality
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  • Ketan Rajgor (10/22/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    You stop breathing and life is over
    Close the eyes and loose the cover
    Anything you miss and chance is lost

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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (9/8/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    It may not bother me as individual
    I may take it simple and casual

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  • Suresh Vakil (8/30/2009 9:36:00 AM)

    want to be simple and honest
    So close to HIM after offering the best
    May it be as difficult as acid test?

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  • Santoksingh Jadeja (8/30/2009 9:26:00 AM)

    want to live and breathe the fresh air
    Concentration full with no split hair

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  • Shilpa Maheswari (8/30/2009 9:12:00 AM)

    What can be secret of longitivity?
    Has it to do something with continuity?
    Any living being has to be continuous
    Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness

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  • Shilpa Maheswari (8/30/2009 9:12:00 AM)

    What can be secret of longitivity?
    Has it to do something with continuity?
    Any living being has to be continuous
    Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness

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  • Ramdulari Sinha (8/28/2009 11:03:00 PM)

    I want to live and breathe the fresh air
    Concentration full with no split hair

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  • Sangita Rao (8/28/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Any living being has to be continuous
    Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness.............10

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  • K.v. Subbarao (8/27/2009 7:48:00 AM)

    want to live and breathe the fresh air
    Concentration full with no split hair...............10

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  • Darshna Chopra (8/27/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    You stop breathing and life is over
    Close the eyes and loose the cover...............10

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (8/27/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    good one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Severina Dsouza (8/26/2009 11:29:00 PM)

    World is demanding more and more
    Situation was not bad as this before.....10

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  • Indani Narayan (8/26/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    What can be secret of longitivity?
    Has it to do something with continuity?
    Any living being has to be continuous....10

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  • Lalvani Rekha (8/26/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    You stop breathing and life is over
    Close the eyes and loose the cover....10

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  • Vijay Suwarnkar (8/26/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    Any living being has to be continuous
    Life is to betaken as challenge with seriousness....10

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  • Kamli Kamal (8/25/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    What can be secret of longitivity?
    Has it to do something with continuity? ....10

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  • Radha Seth (8/24/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    It may bring some sanity
    Life so close to the reality....10

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  • Saroj Davde (8/24/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    Will you eat some food? ”
    It is fresh and good,
    No, Madame, I am sorry,
    Food is no worry, .....10

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  • Reshma Punjabi (8/24/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    Will you eat some food? ”
    It is fresh and good,
    No, Madame, I am sorry.....10

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