john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,540 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

What Did You Do? - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

'no no i have given
to each of them
seven senses. check
check check on them, '
the maker said.

'yes but this one has
only four and this one
three and this one five, '
the checker replied.

'See whether it has been
placed too near fire
Or if fsomeone has messed
up its inner scheme of things?
a short circuit? Some mess up
the programming?
Too much of one sense
might crowd out the others.
Too much of programming
might get it all haywired too.'
'But I think it not only has
lesser sense but is walking
away totally from what it
should be? '


Comments about What Did You Do? by john tiong chunghoo

  • (8/15/2008 12:40:00 PM)

    Restart and try again....It's probably the backlog of cesspooled bulls*it clogging the circuits/senses. We all have it. Some of us are just more noble - honest - open about it. keep on pal, goldy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, August 15, 2008

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