What Do You Do? Poem by kara lee
What Do You Do?
When love comes into your life what do you do? ?
Do you panic? ?
Do you cry? ?
Do you think about all the nights alone? ?
Do you cuddle your teddy? ?
Do you jump into each others arms? ?
Do you kiss with a passion? ?
Do you make love? ?
Do you heart break? ?
Do you run away? ?
Well i know i ran away and cryed and heart broke.. But maybe yours will be different maybe love will love you back. only one wayto find out, go for it! ! (PEACE OUT! !)
Yer now werds im gonna do when luv comes tur me? I sat down n juz enjoy it........
Your day will come, litle girl. Read my Bloom of Youth. Adeline
The shorter the poem, the greater or the lesser it will be. I prefer shorter poems, as do the readers. This is a lesser short poem. The alignment of phrses and words are critical here, and there is misalignment . There is nothing wrong with the format. In fact, it is probably the one I would have chosen or some form of it. It communicates and it is forceful. This subdues its weaknesses to some extent, but the problem is big and is not obscure. GW62
When you get the answer, let me know...perhaps there is no answer....Coach
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5/5/2024 9:31:56 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Funny, I get the same ending. Wonderful poem, if not a little frenzied. X's and O's