Why Take The Young Poem by kara lee

Why Take The Young

Rating: 4.0


Every day some one dies,
Every day a new born crys,
As every week goes by its so ho hard not to cry,
Hearing people die on the news isn't realy anything new,
But why take the young they still have so much to do, so much do be done,

Befor i go there is something for every everyone to know,
Life is hard life is tough but its everything you have to live for, Why would you just chuck that out the door? ?

Love you all! ! XxX

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 11 September 2008

this is a great poem/10/ im going to add it to my fav.s!

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Anthony Edmond John 16 July 2008

Hi Sweetheart You have gotten Poetry in You..Showcase your potentials. Good Job...Cheers. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 June 2008

This is another poem with foundational weaknesses. GW62

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Coach Roth 21 May 2008

Only the good die young...write on...Coach

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