What He Thought Poem by Heather McHugh

What He Thought

Rating: 3.8

We were supposed to do a job in Italy
and, full of our feeling for
ourselves (our sense of being
Poets from America) we went
from Rome to Fano, met
the Mayor, mulled a couple
matters over. The Italian literati seemed
bewildered by the language of America: they asked us
what does "flat drink" mean? and the mysterious
"cheap date" (no explanation lessened
this one's mystery). Among Italian writers we

could recognize our counterparts: the academic,
the apologist, the arrogant, the amorous,
the brazen and the glib. And there was one
administrator (The Conservative), in suit
of regulation gray, who like a good tour guide
with measured pace and uninflected tone
narrated sights and histories
the hired van hauled us past.
Of all he was most politic--
and least poetic-- so
it seemed. Our last
few days in Rome
I found a book of poems this
unprepossessing one had written: it was there
in the pensione room (a room he'd recommended)
where it must have been abandoned by
the German visitor (was there a bus of them?) to whom
he had inscribed and dated it a month before. I couldn't
read Italian either, so I put the book
back in the wardrobe's dark. We last Americans

were due to leave
tomorrow. For our parting evening then
our host chose something in a family restaurant,
and there we sat and chatted, sat and chewed, till,
sensible it was our last big chance to be Poetic, make
our mark, one of us asked

"What's poetry?
Is it the fruits and vegetables
and marketplace at Campo dei Fiori

or the statue there?" Because I was
the glib one, I identified the answer
instantly, I didn't have to think-- "The truth
is both, it's both!" I blurted out. But that
was easy. That was easiest
to say. What followed taught me something
about difficulty,

for our underestimated host spoke out
all of a sudden, with a rising passion, and he said:

The statue represents
Giordano Bruno, brought
to be burned in the public square
because of his offence against authority, which was to say
the Church. His crime was his belief
the universe does not revolve around
the human being: God is no
fixed point or central government
but rather is poured in waves, through
all things: all things
move. "If God is not the soul itself,
he is the soul OF THE SOUL of the world." Such was
his heresy. The day they brought him forth to die

they feared he might incite the crowd (the man
was famous for his eloquence). And so his captors
placed upon his face
an iron mask
in which he could not speak.

That is how they burned him.
That is how he died,
without a word,
in front of everyone. And poetry--

(we'd all put down our forks by now, to listen to
the man in gray; he went on softly)-- poetry

is what he thought, but did not say.

Terry Craddock 10 September 2014

(our sense of being Poets from America) is this land based or time style based, seems to have as many answers as an elusive what is poetry, sometimes poetry is the joy of letting words speak for themselves; yet without a common language there can be no discourse crossing cultural barriers.

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Serena Silenced 10 September 2013

Nice story. I especially liked the end.

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Anita Sehgal 10 September 2012

the irony of life... well brought out...a good read

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Lamont Palmer 10 September 2013

Flat and without music, but still an interesting read.

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Stephen Roxborough 07 November 2004

bravo! bravissimo! ! saw you at the skagit river poetry festival last spring and was looking forward to running into you again. thanks for your provocative thoughts. rox.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 December 2023

Rereading this brilliant poem, is still very attractive for me, then she is a genius of a Poetess. Once again CONGRATULATIONS!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 December 2022

Does this mean she was already ripe to join the espionage service? (at twelve) Or does she mean that almost all of her poems originated from eavesdropping? With this poetess lies the answer. But to me she is an excellent poetess!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 December 2022

(we'd all put down our forks by now, to listen to the man in gray; he went on softly) -- poetry is what he thought, but did not say.I like very much the rhyming in: The man in gray, poetry is what he thought but did not say. Excellent rhymes!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 December 2022

Excellent poetry, genius Poetess, North-American Poetess and a dedicated Teacher/Lecturer

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 December 2022

This poem is underrated by PH, I give this amazing poem a 5 Stars TOP Score, it used to be the 10 Points in PH previous life

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Heather McHugh

Heather McHugh

San Diego, California
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