Stranger My Angel….. Poem by Anita Trivedi

Stranger My Angel…..

Rating: 3.8


To me you are stranger,
Than say how can you be
my angel…..

How can I share with you my
smiles and tears?
But it’s also true being with
you I forget all my fears.
I just know you bit & just your
name,
Then why did you burn yourself
in my flame.

Yours thoughts, yours talks makes
me smile,
Moments spend with you are fragile.
You supported me when all others
fail,
I pinch myself that you are not
fairy tale.

To me you are stranger,
Than say how can you be my angel…..

Your sweet wishes & cute smiles
bright my day,
You are very precious in deep core
that’s my heart says.
When stars shine and moon is light,
I smile softly coz I know you will come
in my dreams to wish me good night.

I wished, I prayed to spend my life
with you,
Though moments spend with you were
very few.
Alarm ringed & woke me up & I smiled
to that stranger,
Coz it was just a dream a stranger
being my angel.

To me you are stranger,
Than say how can you be
my angel…..


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dom N. Kafley 16 July 2010

Loved reading your 'Stranger my Angel'. Keep flowing in words. Fluidity is what liquids get just keeping to flow. So are we-who keep writing for lucidity of what we write. -Dom

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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 July 2010

Really very precious your feelings. Keep it hide within you otherwise you will loss it. Well-written subconscious, never try to make it real in life. Keep it as a cave unexcavated, only the map within your heart dear poet. Good poem. Enjoyed. Write more. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla

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Antonio Liao 12 July 2010

a glimpse of angel, lighted with emotional feature.....good for reflection God bless. a 10 +++

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Amrit Rathi 07 July 2010

Beautiful poem! nicely penned with tender feelings. Thanks fro inviting.

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Nooruddeen Mm 06 July 2010

Anita It is, of course, a nice one. well written When i read the line 'Alarm ringed & woke me......' i just remembered my poem 'My River'. Though the theme is entirely different. If time permits pls read 'My River' where you can see how the alarms kill our sweet dreams.

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