What The Past Was Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What The Past Was

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Facts might have been manipulated
The past incidences might have been unrelated
Yet it serves the purpose of being called nationalistic
This is very much essential and forms the basic

No matter what the past was
No matter what the lie was all about?
It ahs held nation together
Much to the surprise of others

Why patriotism is so important/
Why is it absent in many countries at present?
I shall go by one popular agreement
Let there be only popular movement

Why to dig past when country is held as one?
All people long peace care for none
Why people of same faith even do not share same platform?
What is purpose behind even if we are well informed?

The land is holy and its cause should be supreme
People must live under one roof and enjoy freedom
The democracy or dictatorship must keep people united
Whether under fear or freedom they should always be delighted

Have we not forgotten one basic principle?
Why poor and rich people have to struggle?
Poor is starving and rich is unable to enjoy
Why to live with false impression and deny?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

Facts might have been manipulated The past incidences might have been unrelated

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

Lack of flow. Dana Larson20 minutes ago Felt the heart, but was left without soul.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

We all live under the same roof Nate Frampton22 minutes ago Boy this is tough to read, but it seems as though much purpose as been applied here. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

ok Ouranos Frey20 minutes ago not bad though I didn't enjoy it lol sorry mate really am keep writing though Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 March 2014

« Delete » Meet Won a Me.. Have we not forgotten one basic principle? Why poor and rich people have to struggle? Poor is starving and rich is unable to enjoy Why to live with false impression and deny?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 March 2014

Shujat Ahmad, Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon and Rajesh Jaiswal like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 March 2014

Like 18 hours ago by Calamitee ZzZzZz (Cuz They be sleeping on Me) to what the past was

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 March 2014

Like 7 hours ago by Eyedea Lost in thought to what the past was

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

Lack of patriotism Debbie Ache19 minutes ago I like it, the patriotism in this Republic for which our flag stands in America, no longer seems to be allowed. I think your poem conveys this. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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