Whatever You Are Be A Good One Poem by Srushti Dodamani

Whatever You Are Be A Good One

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I dont want to be fair and lovely
I want my mind to be as vast as the
Black night sky.
I want my thoughts to be like the
Brown dirt that connects to create a
Tall mountain.
I want my words to be like dark
chocolate, sweet even when they
Speak bitter truths,
Forget fair and lovely
I want to be dark and proud

Friday, July 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Always be a good person..and helpfull to others
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2020

I want my mind to be as vast as the Black night sky. I want my thoughts to be like the Brown dirt that connects to create a Tall mountain. What a great imagination. and the poet's notes be always good sublime mind. tony

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Varsha M 31 July 2020

A dark chocolate is good metaphorical use. Vast as dark sky...and brown dirt for tall mountain. Explicit imagination and creativity. Admirations. Keep writing.

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