I Wish My Mind Would Stop For Sometimes Poem by Srushti Dodamani

I Wish My Mind Would Stop For Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


I always wonder if you will be part of my future
Will you know what I did with my life?
If I made it through the pain and the struggles?
Will I know if your dreams ever came true
Or if you gave up on them?
Will you care what my old self looks like?
Will you still be there to talk me in the middle of night,
When I'm having a panic attack?
Will you tell me to breathe when I feel like I can't?
Will we ever know how we have become in the future,
Or is the image we have of each other be frozen in time...

Saturday, July 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To my love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 26 July 2020

A beautiful touchy note to love. Every word is prescious. Every feel is important. These all carry us to the future we dreamt together. So well you have written. Admirations.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2020

Will you still be there to talk me in the middle of night, ....to the love nice expression

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 July 2020

Expectations kills. Just flow with the time and make best use of today. Sensitive poem Srushti. Keep writing and welcome to PH.??

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