When Daddy Is Unwell Poem by Charity Nduhiu

When Daddy Is Unwell

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When daddy is unwell the house is cold
the warmth which comes from his sweet
advise reduces drastically and dogs stop barking just
when daddy is unwell

Sweet breakfast is not there, coins and old notes
are searched in all the kitchen drawers just to
buy a packet of milk for breakfast only
when daddy is unwell

Phone calls ever now and then
work cannot be done reports are
never submitted in time just
when daddy is unwell

Friday, June 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about daddies responsibility in the family it is ruined when he is not there or is unwell.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 17 April 2015

The importance of an experienced and old father is nicely painted.

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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2014

Oh, what a difference. It's just not the same when Dan's not well. Thanks for this poem show casing the importance of well being, especially when it comes to Dad.

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Charity Nduhiu 15 July 2015

Thank you all for the encouragement.

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