When Echoes Rebound Poem by Dr subhendu kar

When Echoes Rebound

Rating: 5.0


The echoes rebound blue
beauty when delves deep
as when eternal thunder thrums
across the rain of the clouds

when the smiles of the night ripple first
you descend slowly into the crowd
with your blazing banner as the crown
I simply take a bow to your gleams of love

as night marches with all its mercenaries
even with drizzles of black dusts
onto last speckle of the whispers
the moons of the moments I latch on to

as the smacks of fear loom large
when the promises of the tryst shine
lest darkness vile of the night
may whet the blue by the fire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arunesh Goswami 23 May 2010

A beautiful composition.10++++. Thanks for sharing.

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Ewigi Liebe 27 December 2007

Wonderfully write Dr. beauty delves deep as when eternal thunder thrums across the rain.

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Broken Peaces 16 December 2007

A truely beautiful write you are like the master jigsaw maker makeing each word fit perfectly max vote thanks Chris

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Chris Mendros 16 December 2007

Great images and excellent cadence. An enjoyable, evocative read. Nice work.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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