When Eyes Beckoning Poem by Dr subhendu kar
When Eyes Beckoning
Beamed beneath sunshine arrows
As I see me through the mirror
I am swallowed by its scoffing silver
Against the time bitterly truthful
But still I do remember my dream
When you sneak to me unnoticed
And my totality redeemed and rocked up
Reflecting upon my soul yet unfazed.
That reflexes into my eyes rolling upon
silver screen to your whole being divine.
Each speckle of your passion unveils my desire
Like a fountain in to the eternal spring.
And I see you in golden shadow
Dazzling over my dream steeped in mist
As if to rave up my heart- universe
Battered by love sweetened in acceptance.
As the sun could not shine through
I stooped over my love disheveled
Across the lake of my remembrance
Making me detracting apart and alone.
You reach me in your quest of moon
Shining in tears of laughter and joy
Impaling the clouds- the pangs of pain
you shine bright through when eyes beckoning.
I am impressed by your choice of word combinations. I find them perfectly aligned in this poem. It was a beautiful reading. GW62
A rich use of language and imagery. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:48:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a poetry of great passion, a poetry of heartache, a poetry on way of life, a poetry on the beauty of a dream....marvelous words merging to come up with a very passionate piece...i love to keep on reading this....i never knew a heart could smile until i read this piece....a beautiful scenery is vividly captured in your written words...10++++++ as usual...and my vote....