When I Am With You Poem by Jack Prost

When I Am With You

Rating: 5.0


Calm waters reflecting a blue sky
A green forest shoreline
Birds soaring underneath perfectly placed clouds

Silent snow in a crisp dry cold
Snowflakes flirting
Sun shining, reflecting the brilliant white

Waves slowly sweeping across the sand
Shells magically appearing
Footprints fading with the incoming tide

Soft rain gently falling across the lawn
Droplets splashing together
Cleansing the taint of day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bett Lawson 25 August 2009

Nicely done Jack. Very nice.

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Linda Weischedel 31 May 2009

Great write Jack, enjoyed reading this poem. I give it a 10.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 22 February 2009

a lovely picture in words

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Anjali Sinha 26 November 2008

so picturesque-- calm waters, green forest, snowflakes flirting, droplets splashing-- i couldnt have asked for more +++10 regards anjali

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

i can feel the atmosphere too.............the calmness

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