When I First Met You Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

When I First Met You

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'When I first met you
years ago...
it was also the first time
that I felt the true essence
and the real meaning of love
that as time goes by
every moved you make
every laughter
and the way you talked
it was also the time I learned
what poetry really mean
though not much has happened
the first time we met
yet love was felt and seen
both in our eyes and hearts
my love that started with you
will surely ends
with loving thoughts of you.'

Saturday, August 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 27 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of love, Jesus. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 September 2017

Thank you Mr Jazib Kamalvi for your comment, really appreciate this a lot.

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