"When I Left That River"Original: Gayatri Phukantranslated By Rupa Phukan Saikia Poem by Gayatri Phukan

"When I Left That River"Original: Gayatri Phukantranslated By Rupa Phukan Saikia

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A vermilion evening
I came back
from that river side..
When I came back,
I repeated that song
the brahmani ducks
were singing and dancing
whole day
And I carried the fragrance of yellowish
flowers of mustard seeds

I thought then..
what a faithful the river is
All secret grieves
can be cleaned indefatigable
in that river......

Thursday, January 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: natural
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 31 January 2019

Faithfull river, great write

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Gayatri Phukan 31 January 2019

Thank your very much.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 March 2019

the brahmani ducks were singing and dancing whole day And I carried the fragrance of yellowish flowers of mustard seed... all secrets grieves can be cleansed here. a great poem..tony

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 02 March 2019

a beautiful imagery in melodious words.

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Gayatri Phukan 03 March 2019

Thanks a lot jagdish singh Ramana

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2019

FORGOT 10 PINTS PLUS+++++++++++++++++++

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Gayatri Phukan 03 March 2019

Thank you dear poet the poet poet.thank you

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Gayatri Phukan 03 March 2019

Thank you dear poet the poet poet

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2019

YOUR POEM SPEAKS OF LIFE A RIVER IS LIFE AND ROMANCE KINDLY DO READ MY TWO POEMS MOMS SMILES AND BRAZENED ONE THANKS IN ADVANCE

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2019

Life itself flows as a river and of romance you poem speaks loudly ma'am do kindly read my two poems MOMS SMILES AND BRAZENED POEM

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