When I Look Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When I Look

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When I look at totality of universe
It includes human beings, birds, animals
how they have created nice space!
And created challenge to survive in race

I find sky with different attitude
How much it accommodates with gratitude
Unaccounted stars and moon at the center
With no clash at all and ever some fear

Well below the belt, it houses open ground
The birds see it as flying zone all around
They venture freely and come back on earth
Tree as home and earth as shield till death

I find sea as majesty of its own class
How many lives take shelter in mass?
Each big creature kills smaller one to survive
Even great divers get afraid when resolutely dive

Whole of the nature is around us
Air, water and trees are there in abundance
When birds can sing and chirp openly
Why do we feel sad and sit sadly?

It is good to feel pleasure
We shall never be so much sure
Nature has given us so much
We need worry and think as such

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

en I Look At by Hansmukh Mehta is a nice poetic endeavour to present the universe as the poet sees it. Kesavan Subramanian8 minutes ago It is a good Nature poem. I like it. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

nice Keek Ruiz21 minutes ago I enjoyed reading your perspective on how you see life.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Lovely... 4 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

When I look at totality of universe It includes human beings, birds, animals

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