When I Look At You Poem by TP Sage

When I Look At You

Rating: 4.7


when I look at you
i see an endless universe in your eyes
an infinite unimaginable beauty
that I could touch every day but might never hold
in your eyes i feel a consuming loneliness
a soft hunger, a quiet thirst
an invisible erosion that everyday
silently takes more of you away.
Your lips are silent
but they still whisper
the smoldering hiss of desire,
a pulsing cayenne ember of a passion
that will inflame the heart and mind of any man
fortunate enough to taste of their fire.
I sense, about you, the grey aura of loss
a loss of love, a loss of people, a loss of trust, a loss of belief
they do not belong to you, they belong to the past
and if you cling to them,
you will become what they are
a memory...
I hear the music of your beating heart
a cacophony of sound
cleansing laughter and dancing rain,
the pregnant pause of a tear
the startled joy of exclamation
angry rolling thunder
the caressing whisper of dreams
a symphonic, new age, one woman band
with a string section
and i have fallen in love with the composition.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Ashe 06 April 2017

Honestly, the only poem of which I have identified myself with. To interpret each word with satisfaction due to the fact that you can connect with the author is truly baffling. Astounding piece.

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Lindan Anthony 15 June 2012

Ripe imagery. Haunting phrasing. I was touched and for a moment hopeful... that yet, perhaps...Oh let me love with all my strength if I am careless enough to love again

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Debora Short 26 October 2007

Powerfully haunting wisdom writing in a softly gentle light. A ten for sure and it goes on my fav list!

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TP Sage

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Coral Gables, Florida
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