Friday, October 26, 2007

When I Look At You Comments

Rating: 4.7

when I look at you
i see an endless universe in your eyes
an infinite unimaginable beauty
that I could touch every day but might never hold
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Kelly Ashe 06 April 2017

Honestly, the only poem of which I have identified myself with. To interpret each word with satisfaction due to the fact that you can connect with the author is truly baffling. Astounding piece.

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Lindan Anthony 15 June 2012

Ripe imagery. Haunting phrasing. I was touched and for a moment hopeful... that yet, perhaps...Oh let me love with all my strength if I am careless enough to love again

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Debora Short 26 October 2007

Powerfully haunting wisdom writing in a softly gentle light. A ten for sure and it goes on my fav list!

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