Thursday, July 8, 2010

When I'M Gone

Rating: 4.8
Everything is elusive,
I'm so cheated life has become abusive.

Wasting my writing time wondering alone
Why in this sundry of chaos I wander alone

I am lost amid a wilderness of imbalance,
But in this life the imbalance is balance.

Pain feeds on my souls flesh
As vultures feed on scavenged flesh

And fear is feeding on my joy
As I have become another realms toy.

When I come to the end of my helpless wallow,
When I become just a shadow

And take of this dust garment,
I hope I'll be blessed to have a blissful life in the firmament.
Kobik William
Touching. Beautiful. You paint a picture that clearly communicates your emotions.
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Joseph Poewhit 14 July 2010
'dust garment' is a very fitting line
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Konstantin Filipov 14 July 2010
the vivid picture that you create is somehow scary as well as beautiful. thanks for sharing.
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Rebo Bebo 13 July 2010
you have a firmament of imagination
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Musa Ochieng 11 July 2010
This is one of the best poems i've ever found to be encouraging. Bring more stuff.
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max pike 11 July 2010
its so beautiful and outstanding ~ what you wrote so deep from heart and soul, I feel like its breathing infront of my face , what you wrote is just how i feel exactly! ! ! ~*~i truely love this poem, thx for sharing =]
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Beautiful usage of words..brilliant expressions...Pain is coming out well from this poem..bravo...
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