Samuel finley


When(I'M Without You, With You Is Where I'D Rather Be.) - Poem by Samuel finley

When I close my eyes, you're the first thing that I see.
When I think, you're the first thing that I think of.
When I smile, you're the immediate suspect of the deed.
When I dream, you're what I always hope to dream of.
When I'm with you, nothing can come between us.
When I'm without you, with you is where I'd rather be.


Comments about When(I'M Without You, With You Is Where I'D Rather Be.) by Samuel finley

  • (11/8/2011 12:38:00 PM)


    I love this one! :) Keep it up! (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (5/15/2011 5:05:00 PM)


    A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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