Wednesday, September 21, 2005

When I Was A Kid.............. Comments

Rating: 4.8

THE BIRDS ARE SINGING,
AND THE TREES STAND
STRONG, THE GRASS IS
WAVING BACK THEN FORTH,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Duncan Wyllie 06 February 2006

Beautifully written felt for a moment that I was stood there watching you.Love Duncan

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 21 September 2005

very nice David, well and simply put. -Eila

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 21 September 2005

Good poem David. Simple and Sweet. Thank you.

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Allan James Saywell 21 September 2005

What a lovely poem david it has soothed me ironed my anger calmed the devil i love feel good poetry straight from the heart Warm regards allan

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