Everything is over and
everything now is gone.
My heart is broken ito pieces
and nobody knows it at all.
Maybe it was all my fault
to fall in this mess called love.
Once when I was in love
everything seemed like dream.
I felt like I was in heaven
with an angel made for me.
Didn't realize it was all wrong.
Couldn't see that heaven was hell.
the angel was a devil and
all things I admired was evil.
He broke my heart, my faith
and left me all alone, beneath.
Falling in love was like
the biggest mistake ever made.
Didn't knew when the
real mask falls off
it can hurt at the worst.
'' Falling in love was like the biggest mistake ever made. '' falling in love is not a 'mistake', dear Chizu. It may hurts, as Manna said (box below) , and it can become even a 'tragedy', sometimes -unfortunately-, but 'falling in love' is a natural event.. as we are human beings.. then it's up to us to 'manage' our feelings and face the adversities.. A well penned write, Chizu. Thanks for sharing Ciao
Yeah.. Love is hurt.. But love is haven too.. Thanks for poem...I Love it..
Yeah.. Love is hurt.. But love is haven too.. Thanks for poem.. It's heart touching.. Love it..
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A good depiction of distress, resentment, disappointment and frustration, that is felt when bliss of love makes its exit. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Chizu. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.