When My Love Feels That She Is Free... Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

When My Love Feels That She Is Free...

Rating: 5.0


When my love feels that she is free,
She flies beyond my sky with winged creatures,
Sending tears ever hurting me,
For love's not a matter of days and then departure,
Freedom from love means not to betray,
But these tiny detachments keep making tears,
Love shall be love, which even betrayers say,
For an impediment here's night's sun, yet not a fear.
With no sign of me, you, in your empty streets,
Be crying for me whom once you had hurt,
With those street lamps lighting love's weird feats,
And joining broken hearts which love's hands had got,
Ever be futile shall love be without shrieks with haste,
For this shan't go in vain bringing smiles with no rest.

When My Love Feels That She Is Free...
Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
if we are betrayed in love we should not lose our hope......we should know that a man betrays those, he loves the most and thinks him as his own........these things make love stronger and more cordial.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2014

Rose leaves when the rose is dead, Is heaped for the beloved's bed, And so thy thought when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on. (P.B.C. Shelley) Nice poem and the picture is also nice..............10

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Valsa George 07 December 2014

Temporary separations and withdrawals will only make love stronger! So there is no need to lose hope! Wait for the days when tears will be replaced by smiles! A sweet poem on love!

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Salini Nair 06 December 2014

nicely portrayed the strenghth of love.....nice...

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

Feelings of love so well brought out with loving and touching words really makes this piece phenomenal.......10/10........very nicely composed

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