When We Fell Out Of Love Poem by john tiong chunghoo

When We Fell Out Of Love

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when we fell out of love
it was a storm of leaves
pieces of us fell everywhere
familiar spots, they fade like
fallen leaves that eventually bond
with eternity without a trace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 29 July 2006

So few words and yet, saying so much. I like 'a storm of leaves, pieces of us fell everywhere' - describes it perfectly. Thank you, John, for this one. Love, Fran xx

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Raynette Eitel 28 July 2006

This is a beautiful, sad image, John. I like it. Raynette

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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