Wednesday, December 17, 2014

When Will Be Spring? Comments

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Save me from the pouring rain, make shed,
I am drench with tear and fear, I am sad,
Dark cloud hovering above the earth,
And life here on earth is livening worth,
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Hazel Durham 17 December 2014

Intense imagery with the sadness of dark clouds and endless rain you plea for the coming of spring to lighten your load! Lovely write!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 17 December 2014

When Will Be Spring is a beautiful poem.I enjoyed it.Well expressed Well done.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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