When Will Be Spring? Poem by Aftab Alam

When Will Be Spring?

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Save me from the pouring rain, make shed,
I am drench with tear and fear, I am sad,
Dark cloud hovering above the earth,
And life here on earth is livening worth,

Why always rain drain, autumn and summer?
Warmth of life has gone -lost, why I tremor?
Everybody questions to self with zing,
Tell me, just tell me, when will be spring?

Wednesday, December 17, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 17 December 2014

Intense imagery with the sadness of dark clouds and endless rain you plea for the coming of spring to lighten your load! Lovely write!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 17 December 2014

When Will Be Spring is a beautiful poem.I enjoyed it.Well expressed Well done.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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