Whining Poem by Eddi Hong

Eddi Hong

Eddi Hong

Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia

Whining

Rating: 4.3


Staring at the cloudy sky
winter
Pouring rain
Wishing this scenery for eternity

Personalities
same trends in popularity
sensation on majority
Thinking

They learn but think less
They wise but clueless
shame
so frustrating

realize
the power of universe
no
they pretend to not

standstill
evening
staring at the gray sky
sobbing

once again
apologize
loosing in my own thoughts
once again

Tuesday, November 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
just whining, sorry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 June 2019

such a nice write, Eddi. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Eddi Hong

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Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia
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