Whirlpool Poem by Liilia Talts Morrison

Whirlpool



There are days my balance ceases
Sanity decreases
Fear releases
Its dark whirlpool

There are days deep hidden urges
Surface and despair emerges
Life's thread verges
On whirlpool's rim

There are days as black as condors
Mind can't ponder
Body wanders
Into a whirlpool

There are days with no forewarning
Noon or morning
Unadorning
Pull me down.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some days are more challenging than others.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret O Driscoll 09 January 2016

'Whirlpool's rim', 'There are days as black as condors', Liilia your poetry has me in a whirlpool of admiration and awe, deep, delightful, delicious!

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