Blissful whispers, the ebbing tide,
A sated lover’s sigh.
Scintillating breeze against my cheek,
Teasing me with warm salty breath,
I whisper secrets; she listens,
My precious trusted friend,
She understands my troubles and fears,
Offers me hopes and dreams.
Gazing at her magnificence,
I am but a grain of sand,
She is my sanctuary,
A sacred temple for my thoughts,
Without judgement, she comforts,
Ever unchanging, ever extraordinary,
Nature’s most precious gift – the sea.
Beautiful and enchanting! With a touch of mystery! You create beauty with imagination and talent. Good job! :) DC
She understands my troubles and fears, Offers me hopes and dreams. Gazing at her magnificence, I am but a grain of sand, She is my sanctuary, A sacred temple for my thoughts, Without judgement, she comforts, Ever unchanging, ever extraordinary, Nature’s most precious gift – the sea. what a great, sweet and poetic way done whispers.. really its heart feeling poem dont in a very much melodic way written..liked the style you write or compose the words and verses..enjoyed this poem and read few times..well done 10/10
Brilliantly written. Breathtaking in its premise. Without a doubt a 10.
This is how mysterious this site can be! ! All of a sudden, A great poem like this one is revealed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Vow! you have a great friend there. Lovely flow of thoughts. Well written....10+++