White Flag, Dark Cloud Poem by Casey Renee Kiser / snail viXen

White Flag, Dark Cloud

Rating: 5.0


dark cloud surrender
take me prisoner
torture me
with half moons
and less than super
stars

dark cloud surrender
deep ditch endeavor
torture me
with grave heights
and less than lively
spirits

white flag for you, dark cloud



(©CaseyReneeKiser2007)

White Flag, Dark Cloud
Saturday, August 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
©Casey Renee Kiser2007
From the book 'Swan Wreck' and 'Hold Me Under: Poems to Drown to'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 24 August 2013

A great poem, like it.

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