Spit Me Out Poem by Casey Renee Kiser / snail viXen

Spit Me Out

Rating: 4.7


Swallow me whole
If you think you can
Breathe me in
If you're that type of man

Tell me a story
That will keep me awake for weeks
Unravel me all the way
Raise my demons out of their seats

Slide under my skin
If you can handle this
Break into my obscenity
Hyperventilate inside my kiss

Now spit me out
I'm no valentine
I might let you hang around and love me
But don't bother to unwind


(©CaseyReneeKiser2012)

Spit Me Out
Friday, September 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the book 'Spit Me Out'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Duncky 20 September 2013

Nice one there, great depictions.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2021

Correction: The Member Poem Of The Day, its Title is FOREST.. Thank you for your attention.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2021

Dear Poetess, this is a very sad poem,5 Star full for the excellent words in this poem. Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day for your poem THE FORREST, but no one can give comment because there was no space for that. Brilliant poem.presented.

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Prasad Indraganti 11 October 2020

Spit me out, I might let you hang around and love me. But don’t bother to unwind. Declaring rights of women.

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Bobby Yadav 17 January 2019

Dark yet beautiful. i loved it :) thanks for sharing.

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Bobby Yadav 17 January 2019

I don't know why i find it dark but yet it is beautiful poem. i like it, thanks for sharing :)

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