ben siemsen

Whitsundays

nice beaches that r so
calm when u walk over the sand
and u can go places where u havnt
been before so the only way to get out there
is to go there where u want to

Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 22, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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Comments about Whitsundays by ben siemsen

  • Jerry Hughes (12/6/2007 5:49:00 PM)

    ..............................................................................WHAT?

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  • Fallen Too Far (12/5/2007 10:48:00 PM)

    I love the completly candid nature of your writings, it is very defiant and shows what you are thinking, even if it doesn't make sense to the rest of the world. I think it may be a little more effective if you write full words (i.e. 'are' instead of 'r')
    But lovely poem altogether! I love it :)

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  • love and death (12/5/2007 10:16:00 PM)

    nicely done :) <3 mandy

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  • Angel Ofdarkness (11/28/2007 10:26:00 PM)

    Nice Poem and has a good message

    Best Wishez,
    Angel

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  • backwoods barbie (11/22/2007 10:01:00 PM)

    good job ben! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like it alot

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