Saturday, October 17, 2009

Who Am I? Comments

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you all know me and you know my name.
i am something you can not tame

i can be as gentle and as soft
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2009

'i am'-a child of a mother called nature. and she like me, is as beautiful as can be. she can enslave you, or set you free........lovely poem to be defined fors elf....i loved it most....10

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 October 2009

Well thought out and brilliant composed.

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Hey I thought the poem is about you! ! ! But loved the twist in the tail. Very creative work. We have a similar sort of a sinhala song about wind. your poem remind me of that song.... Your breezy write just blew me away.. Great one! ! Cheers Shan

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Christine Kerr 18 October 2009

Surprise ending for sure, I thought for sure I would be reading.... on who you are. Thats OK Louis, just keep me guessing.

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