Who Am I Poem by FRAGMENTS AND PIECES

Who Am I



I have been invited to dispose myself
by a song that took my soul from where it dwelt
i pondered my whole being
i am reflecting of what i am becoming
i saw myself constantly wander
i sometimes become a good pretender

God has been there with me
he has let me feel it though i neglect to see
even though i'd rather choose my selfishness
He waits until i come to realize my foolishness
shame has confronted my heart
but the truth, in God's love i can never depart

the song who am I has given me a mark
in whatever way i can see it in my heart
my reflecting spirit proves my attitude
poor soul of mine often come to emotional mode
over and over again I see my sinfulness
but until now I cannot boast that I lost my loneliness

Many people had come across my life
unworthy as I am but they asked me to give some light
failure to manipulate myself, I've loosened my feeling
I cannot deny this way I found myself sinning
at first i am enthusiastic to bring them on high
but in some end i found myself to make alibi

I am who I know moves in me
but many times the world speaks of contrary reality
I couldn't escape what others could also speak of
what matters is I do not stop to walk
I might have changed the way I am appearin'
deep within me something would always remain.

1 October 2011. Putiao, Pilar Sorsogon.Retreat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 October 2011

i forgot to add, in your last stanza, i really believe that there will always be that something that will remain true to us though other people will see some changes. it will always us who will find the real us, sometimes too we feel unworthy but anyway as long as we know what is the truth we are on the right track

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 10 October 2011

oh yes that song a very touching song tagos sa buto ANG MENSAHE

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