Who Are You?

you stand by my door
i look at you
not seeing the person i know
who are you?
so cold and detached
your warm eyes icy
your a stranger this way
saying words that you know hurt
Did i ever really know you?
I dont understand what has happened
what has changed
why now?
is it me?
Is it you?
Is it the world
I am afraid i have to ask you to leave
i was taught to never talk to strangers
That is what you have become
a stranger
who are you?

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Lilian Chromious Eveson 15 January 2012

The your n the your a stranger this way is supposed to be 'you're' and there are some letters that are supposed to be capitalized. Keep on writing, there are some mistakes but just like they said, Mistakes can improve you. I hope you write more poems since this one is very beautiful, goodluck!

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