Who Are You? Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Who Are You?

Rating: 4.8


I'm someone that
With this poem am provoked;
One that my love for
Poetry are all but evoked.

I'm someone that
You'll treasure with pride;
One that evokes deep emotions
Of a beautiful love poems.

I'm someone that storms
Of this life cannot sweep away;
One that your aged tears'll weep
Like a flame of light flies away.

I'm someone with faith that you
Need when tumble down life's slopes;
One that will courage you, cheer you
In this marathon of life's trials.

I'm someone with love that is
Stronger than the mountains;
One that will bouy you
Above tribulation mountains.

I'm someone with a heart that is
Fragile, yet deeper that the fountains;
One that will nurse you, parachute you
When you fall from the mountains.

Thursday, November 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

Nice Anaphora poem nice 10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Thanks for your positive feedback.... much appreciated

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 18 May 2018

Thanks foks for your comments on this poem...much appreciated.

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Simon 04 December 2017

Beautiful poem, Lungelo.... nice rhythm

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Thanks Simon for tiredless effort in reading my poetry and commenting as well.... much appreciated

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Unknown 23 November 2017

Oh wow! I'm someone that With this poem am provoked One that my love for Poetry are all but evoked

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Thanks for reading and laying such a positive thought contribution to this poem.....Thanks again

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